Deviation Actions
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Rather confused by this thing. A couple of points....
The barrel and action are integral to the magazine? That will add unnecessary weight and bulk to every magazine (and thus you'll carry fewer reloads), not to mention making every magazine much more expensive.
Are those cartridges facing each other? It's hard enough for a gun to rotate the cartridges the way the P90 does, but this adds a level of complexity if they have to alternately rotate different ways
No sights. How do you aim?
The grip and the entire weapon don't look ergonomic to me, looks like it would be awkward and uncomfortable to use.
You seem to have a lot of technical competence as an artist and in rendering, your pictures could easily be thought to be real photos at first glance. However, I think your gun designs are fundamentally flawed